They're both nice. The one on the right as a thumbnail though looks a bit like barbed wire--which is not a great image. So I'd prefer the one on the left. Can you make the title font larger? I like your title, too.
I'd go larger still on the font--as large as you can and still fit on the cover. Even your name could be a little larger. To get the title larger, you could arrange it like (centered, of course) Grammar Games for Better Language Instruction If it doesn't look good like that, then the two lines is fine though. Remember that your customers will be seeing it as a thumbnail, though. You want that title to be visible!
I was about to say the same with Dorothy - I like the colors and the stripes of the one on the right for sure, but the stars remind me of barbed wire and have rather negative connotations.
Here are the first few pages with my new topic (I changed it a few days ago) to better reflect my interest in teacher well-being. I learned today that well-being is spelled with a hyphen in Canadian English. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bwo_ITamV68qbWdacEUzT0w5bUk/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bwo_ITamV68qbWdacEUzT0w5bUk/view?usp=sharing
Hi everyone! I'm an ELT writer, based in Ecuador. I've had more than 25 books published, mostly primary course books, but also secondary and adult. This will be my third iTDi course so far this year and I really hope to end up with an ebook, after planning for so long to do this. I'm looking forward to working with you all and to learning from Dorothy.
Introudcing the work and creating a kind of attention grabber is a very important step in writing I guess. So, here is a little piece I Wrote sometime ago. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByjDsaE1H6epbWdMYjVZYjlhS2c/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByjDsaE1H6epbWdMYjVZYjlhS2c/view?usp=sharing
They're both nice. The one on the right as a thumbnail though looks a bit like barbed wire--which is not a great image. So I'd prefer the one on the left. Can you make the title font larger? I like your title, too.
ReplyDeleteDorothy the title is actually your suggestion. It is short and to the point
ReplyDeleteYes Catherine the one on the left has a party mode I guess
ReplyDeleteThe colours are vibrant and energizing!
ReplyDeleteI'd go larger still on the font--as large as you can and still fit on the cover. Even your name could be a little larger. To get the title larger, you could arrange it like (centered, of course)
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If it doesn't look good like that, then the two lines is fine though. Remember that your customers will be seeing it as a thumbnail, though. You want that title to be visible!
You could even try
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I was about to say the same with Dorothy - I like the colors and the stripes of the one on the right for sure, but the stars remind me of barbed wire and have rather negative connotations.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely the first one (on the left).
ReplyDeleteWow I didn't see that barbed wire. It really makes the picture looks like a prison .
ReplyDeleteThe left (the one on the right looks a bit 1970s to me). It's looking great!
ReplyDeleteThe left one. Looks very cool. :)
ReplyDeleteLeft one is really attractive to the reader!
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